Posted by Kelly Belmonte in The Creative Process | 5 Comments
How to Measure Outcomes in Writing
Lately I have been pondering the question of outcomes. How can I know my writing is making a difference? What kind of difference am I trying to make?
My “day job” is with a youth mentoring program where we talk about outcomes with great frequency. We design logic models to show how we intend our activities to make a long term impact on young people and, even more broadly, the community and society as a whole. For example, the average logic model looks something like this:
Resources –> Activities –> Outputs –> Short-term Outcomes –> Long-term Outcomes
Program evaluation usually consists of measuring the metrics along the logic model continuum. For writing, logic model metrics might include things like this:
Pen/Paper/Laptop/Time –> Write/Rewrite/Edit –> Posts/Poems/Novels/Essays –> Published (!) –> Invitations to speak / People quoting our work / Vocab changed (a la Shakespeare)
As may be obvious by the example above, I’m a little fuzzy on long-term outcomes for writing. I stumble into this “what’s the point” mentality, going down a slippery slope of blog traffic counting and revenue generating indicators that leave me numb.
I have always written because I love it. When I start trying to develop success measures, I feel myself getting all stiff and jittery. I do think it is important to know the point, but trying to fit it into a logic model might not work. Or maybe I need to think less about societal outcomes and think more about personal outcomes. Like “maintain sanity.” And “buy some more pens and paper to keep writing.”
This year I set simple goals for myself around writing that played out in neat and unexpected ways. If I had tried to anticipate long-term outcomes around those goals, though, I may have micromanaged it all into a premature fail. My big deal with myself this year was to follow through on simple decisions, wherever those things led – to “decide and delight.” And I did.
When I stop now to “measure the impact” of these decisions, I can’t say I’m a better writer. I do have a broader reach, which I can easily measure through followers on various social media, but that doesn’t mean people are reading what I write. And it sure doesn’t mean my writing is making a difference in any meaningful way to those who do read. How can I possibly measure that kind of impact?
The biggest indicator for me of success with my writing is that I have kept my commitments to myself to write. I posted on my blog at least weekly. I brought other writers into my writing community and engaged with them. I submitted a manuscript to a publisher (and it got accepted!).
It’s not the acceptance that matters, though. It’s that I made a decision to do it, and then I did it. Nothing earth-shattering, but earth-shattering is not how change happens, contrary to popular belief. Change happens when you follow through.
If I have to measure anything to evaluate success, I guess that would be the thing: I’ll count the number of commitments I kept.


Not the acceptance that matters, Kelly? Congratulations!!
But you’re right on point, making the decision to do and “doing it” is a big deal. I’m taking your inspiration to heart and have set concrete weekly and monthly deadlines for finishing my novel. I hope I can say next year what you’ve just shared.
You are indeed an encourager and I love the way you write.
Thanks, Nan. You have encouraged me.
Well, you’ve got my attention. And I’m one faced with similar paradigmatic questions. Keep up the good work. You’re changing lives one syllable at a time.
Thank you, Robert. It’s good to know I’m not alone in my questioning.
I like this, Kelly. I’ve been struggling with some of the same questions you have as I ponder what I want 2013 to look like writing-wise. My takeaway is two bits:
“My big deal with myself this year was to follow through on simple decisions, wherever those things led – to “decide and delight.” And I did.”
and
“The biggest indicator for me of success with my writing is that I have kept my commitments to myself to write. ”
I struggle with rethinking decisions already made, switching horses midstream sort of thing. So this has pointed me in a good direction. Thank you!